Tuesday, May 3, 2011

Words Written With Tainted Tears Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your words are written on my face with mascara-tainted tears
You ripped out my pandoras box
Leaving with my hope
You are much like the young jabberwocky
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Raven Mcgovern
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John DeBona 05 May 2011

I like poems, with twists and references...good job

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 03 May 2011

Great poem with a lot of wisdom. Wonderfully written. Great imagery. Fine poetics. A big...10 Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2

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