Words Well Worth 44: Rare These Fascinating Five Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Words Well Worth 44: Rare These Fascinating Five



Mother and motherland,
River Ganges of this holy land,
Lord Krishna, the charmer,
And one's protective father,
Rare— this five-fold j-sounding bend.
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Transliteration of the subhāśhita along with the meanings of Sanskrit words is given as under:

Jananī janma-bhūmih cha jāhnavī cha janārdanah |
Janakah panchamah cha eva jakārāh pancha durlabhāh ||

jananī: the mother
janma-bhūmih cha: and the motherland
jāhnavī: the Ganges, the sacred river Gangā in North India
cha janārdanah: and Lord Krishna, the charmer of hearts
janakah: one who protects, nourishes
panchamah cha: and the fifth
eva: indeed
jakārāh: words with ‘j' alliteration
pancha: the five
durlabhāh: (are) rare, hard to get

Topic: mother, father, god (Father) , river, god-father

Saturday, January 18, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: father,god,mother
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In the original shloka, all these five have a j consonant. In translation, the five have the same rhyme.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The poet deserves falicitations for the translation without losing the spirit and soul of the original work. The five gifts God has given us viz. mother, father, motherland, Mother Ganga and Lord Krishna are certainly his rare gifts for us....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 02 February 2020

Thanks dear poet for liking the translation. I have done a poetic translation of some 400 subhashitanis, and if they are received well by the PH poets/readers I will present many of them if not all.

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