Drop by drop are drops when caught
Fills up even a large pot,
So is a lesson's learning,
Virtue and wealth, all earning,
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Drop by drop are drops when caught Fills up even a large pot........fascinating rhythm! Liked this wonderful limerick sir......10++++++++++
Your comments are on the spot about 'fascinating rhythm'. The rhythm does sound good, but at times it just happens, which at some other, eludes you. I liked your feedback.
You have well translated and composed a beautiful limerick from the Sanskrit shloka., " jala-bindu nipātena kramashah pūryate ghaţah | / sah hetuh sarva vidyānām dharmasya cha dhanasya cha || Nice work.
When one understands the Sanskrit also, it enhances the work done. Thank you so much dear poet.