Monday, December 2, 2019

Words Well Worth 37: Drop By Drop They Fill Comments

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Drop by drop are drops when caught
Fills up even a large pot,
So is a lesson's learning,
Virtue and wealth, all earning,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 December 2019

You have well translated and composed a beautiful limerick from the Sanskrit shloka., " jala-bindu nipātena kramashah pūryate ghaţah | / sah hetuh sarva vidyānām dharmasya cha dhanasya cha || Nice work.

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Aniruddha Pathak 02 December 2019

When one understands the Sanskrit also, it enhances the work done. Thank you so much dear poet.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 December 2019

Drop by drop are drops when caught Fills up even a large pot........fascinating rhythm! Liked this wonderful limerick sir......10++++++++++

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Aniruddha Pathak 02 December 2019

Your comments are on the spot about 'fascinating rhythm'. The rhythm does sound good, but at times it just happens, which at some other, eludes you. I liked your feedback.

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Mahtab Bangalee 02 December 2019

greedy pot at last gets empty lot

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Aniruddha Pathak 02 December 2019

Great juxtaposition dear MB, thanks for visiting

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