Wednesday, August 28, 2019

Words Well Worth 20: Wealth Weaselled In Greed Comments

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Food grains by ants ferried,
Honey by bees carried,
Wealth hoarded in by greed,
All get lost when in need,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 August 2019

A brilliant poem on Rhyme Royal form has been made by you in favor of shloka " pipīlikā-arjitam dhānyammakśhikā-sanchitam madhu | / lubdhena sanchitam dravyamsamūlam cha vinashyati ||" from subhāśhita which says about greediness. You have much wit to translate such Sanskrit shloka into English.Thank you dear sir.

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 August 2019

Thank you KM, such appreciation makes you go a long way.

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Rajnish Manga 28 August 2019

It requires a great deal of skill to do a translation from Sanskrit to English which the present work is evident of. Thanks for this amazing poem.

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 August 2019

You're right dear RM, the syntax in Sanskrit is very complicated. Besides words are compacted in what is called sandhi. But after translating a lot, it is easier now. Thank you so much for appreciating this.

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