Wednesday, December 21, 2011

Words Unspoken Comments

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I hate to leave like this, with an ache to move on i cant resist.
Its just some things are better unsaid, an empty heart needs to be fed.
So i hit the road to where i dont know, with heavy heart and empty soul.
Following the shoulder of a no name road, this lost highway is now my abode.
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jack green
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Sara Fielder 04 January 2012

Powerful last line and a great poem overall!

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Silentpoet Grl 27 December 2011

Great poem! Many really good lines and the poem had a great movement to it! Great job!

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jack green

jack green

Chattanooga, Tennessee
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