Monday, November 5, 2012

Words That Before I Failed To Speak Comments

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if I raised up my hands
to some perfect heaven
beyond impenetrable clouds
if I collapsed onto an unforgiving earth
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Thomas R. Ruffin
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Kelvin Owusu 06 November 2012

this is an excellent read write, lines really compliment each other. the last few lines for me hits well of a what if. great job

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Thomas R. Ruffin

Thomas R. Ruffin

Hattiesburg, Mississippi
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