Words, Song Of Comments

This is an excellent poem. No doubt about it. Greatly enjoyed it and even found a bit of my own thoughts in there. I would make a small change in the first stanza, 'unto a page' in place of unto this page. Best H

WOW. i cant begin to describe how wonderful of a poem this is! amazing! love starr

QUITE IMPRESIVE INDEED YOUNG MAN...SMOOTH FLUX, KEEN USE OF THE MINDS EYE....WELL CRAFTED>10 '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

I love this poem! It's one of my favourites of yours

THAT WAS A SYMPHONY! ! ! IF YOU ARE AS YOUNG AS YOUR BIRTHDAY SUGGESTS... YOUR MIND HAS AN EXTRA PAIR OF 'EYES, AND WHAT YOU PROBAPLY DREAM WILL GRACEFULLY GROW OLDER/NOT OLD. WHICH I CAN ONLY NAME AS HAVING A 'VISION.'

A song of words we all sing yet you ring luodest