Words Of War Comments

I realize a deep soul slumbers here, On the shores of time, ...............' for only the ripe fruit will stones invite' and pray tell me where is the sweetness in the green fruit?

Excellent poem... please write more… '...There is nothing remains // But the wounds of life // And words of war..’ Very touchy and relevant… Ten++ Ms. Nivedita UK.

nice conceptual metaphor: ''I have drawn numerous lifelines On the shore of time'' wonderful symbolistical poem....10+++