Wednesday, December 11, 2013

Words Of Emotions... Comments

Rating: 3.5

Behold my face in thy eyes
Behold me in thy arms
Let me place my faith in thy soul
Let me rest my head on thy chest
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Tapashya Das Sinha
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 December 2013

My love is always for thee From the bottom of my heart’s ocean! Love Forever! ! ! ... nicely written...10 if it was for almighty it could have been prayer form of poetry where 'thee is super power for us all so it is natural and fine call

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Dinesan Madathil 16 December 2013

Your imaginative flutter is superb and you have the wherewithal to become a top poet. Grammatical stipulations have to be paid attention, please note.

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Kanav Justa 14 December 2013

, , , lovely write, , , well done, , ,

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Valsa George 13 December 2013

You are swept off in the whirlwind of love! ! An upsurge of emotions 'flowing in its own swift sail'! ! Enjoyed this highly passionate write! !

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