Words Of A Broken Heart Comments

a sad poem for a despairate moments..well done

ur poems are romantic... no wonder girls like them. lol

i love it it's so cool and nice poem you rock keep going

i love this one too! ur a machine! lol u didnt capitalize God though. that kinda bugs me. sorry hugs^-^

Very good work with well-placed rhymes and a message that's real in anywhere.10. allan macli

A lovely piece. It's part of becoming mature in a relationship though it hurts but it teaches us a lot.thanks best regards, jdh

Well worded and nicely rhymed. Keep writing but don't say good bye to your soul. With the passage of your age you will explore love from different perspectives and with different meanings and will know more about love and life. Best Wishes Naseer

Very nice poem keep writeing.

the flow is good and the flow can be better if it is free from clutter, .........

toooooo sad...but waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! a heart is not a toy for play' an advice everyone must know....you're really talented..

Arab poets are really true poets. Thank you very much for sharing this piece with us.

I like it! its writen well sad but good... you have great talent! keep on writing

The two poems reflect your negative moods. Perhaps you will do write poems showing your positive moods for our reading pleasure.

It means turn a new leaf in life I feel. It is good. It touched upon new height in love and your poem is also good in narrating this message!

Good write, broken hearts can be mended and new love will come one day, 10 Lynda xx

very sad, but we should move on, don't be disappointed and don't be afraid to fall in love again....10 Hataw

very nice poem I liked it too.I liked the way how you write and discribe your feelings.Very nice

wow it seems like you've been hurt really bad to feel that way. but please take my advice, don't give up, never give up. i did once and it was even worse then the pain i felt before hand. you seem like a strong person, so i believe that you can make it through this, and im here if you need someone to talk to. I'll pray for you, an my friend, God is trying to help you, this i promise you. and i really enjoyed the heart you put into this poem, good job keep it up. Best regards Jess

well expressed feelings........nice read. Thanks! ! ! ! !