Saturday, December 16, 2006

Words Mean Nothing Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I am with you
I am short of words
And then I realise……………
We don’t need words to speek
...
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jibin joseph
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Peter A. Crowther 31 December 2006

A love poem that has the ring of truth. I especially like the last line

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Prasanna Kumari 31 December 2006

love poems should be like this...very powerful and appealing...

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Raghavan Warrier 26 December 2006

At your age if I guess something from this poem, you should not blame me.

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Mary Jinu 21 December 2006

small but great! ! keep on writing

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Sandra Fowler 21 December 2006

Very appealing.I like your style. Kind regards, Sandra

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Asma Bahrainwala 21 December 2006

hmm...eloquent silence as we say... nice li'l poem... Asma...

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Shivapriya Surve 20 December 2006

Hi Jibin! So sweet! How aptly you have captured the psyche of a fumbling, innocent, young mind deeply in love!

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Yeou-Cheng Ma 18 December 2006

lovely poems.... thanks for sharing. You have great ideas. Keep writing!

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Kee Thampi 18 December 2006

When I am with you I am short of words And then I realise…………… We don’t need words to speek And this is a captivating poem.... best wishes

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jibin joseph

cochin, kerala state, india
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