Words like pebbles
Thrown down a pond
Will cause some ripples
That go around.
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The idea of this poem is excellent but it could have been written better. I have a few ideas, I'll send them to you.
I loved this, as we have all said things that we wish we hadn't! I think that if only I could get over my pride, sometimes life would be so much easier.
Watch your words for they become your actions. So whatever we should speak, should be full of wisdomful thoughts......The autiogram of life has to be dignified for what we speak today can even come on us tomorrow. The simli of pebbles is used with mastery to illuminate the importance of words. A very thought provoking poem.
Such a serene, beautifully composed poem, Cynthia.