Friday, June 26, 2009

Words Like Pebbles Comments

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Words like pebbles
Thrown down a pond
Will cause some ripples
That go around.
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Cynthia Buhain-baello
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Susy Evelyne 07 July 2014

Such a serene, beautifully composed poem, Cynthia.

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Casey Geiger 31 January 2010

The idea of this poem is excellent but it could have been written better. I have a few ideas, I'll send them to you.

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James S Newcomb Lang 18 December 2009

I loved this, as we have all said things that we wish we hadn't! I think that if only I could get over my pride, sometimes life would be so much easier.

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Sameer Ahmed 28 June 2009

Watch your words for they become your actions. So whatever we should speak, should be full of wisdomful thoughts......The autiogram of life has to be dignified for what we speak today can even come on us tomorrow. The simli of pebbles is used with mastery to illuminate the importance of words. A very thought provoking poem.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello

Cynthia Buhain-baello

Manila, Philippines
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