Wednesday, May 25, 2005

Words I Would But Will Not Say Comments

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Oft' I wait across the way,
Staid nerves defy my flustered heart
With words I would but will not say,
So steel my tongue before I start.
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David Zvekic
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Ronberge . 01 June 2005

This is another good one! I personally use Thee, Thy and Thou in mine occasionally, depending on the 'drivel effect' I want; -) All the best. Ronberge.

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David Zvekic 26 May 2005

Lamont Palmer would really hate my poem 'Where Exaltation Bides' then. Not only did I use the word 'thee' but I also used the word 'thy'. Certainly it is twice as drivelous for it.

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Mary Nagy 25 May 2005

This is very beautiful. Many love poems end up just like the rest but you've managed to create something very unique. Nice job. Sincerely, Mary

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