Oft' I wait across the way,
Staid nerves defy my flustered heart
With words I would but will not say,
So steel my tongue before I start.
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Lamont Palmer would really hate my poem 'Where Exaltation Bides' then. Not only did I use the word 'thee' but I also used the word 'thy'. Certainly it is twice as drivelous for it.
This is very beautiful. Many love poems end up just like the rest but you've managed to create something very unique. Nice job. Sincerely, Mary
This is another good one! I personally use Thee, Thy and Thou in mine occasionally, depending on the 'drivel effect' I want; -) All the best. Ronberge.