Friday, February 21, 2014

Words Beyond Boundaries. Comments

Rating: 2.5

when happiness can't be won,
to satisfy ourselves we are the one.

sometimes things are not as we see,
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Prabal Dev 12 May 2014

A very good write indeed. Sure, happiness gives even more pleasure when it comes as a gift on our victory over the bad times.

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Md Elias Uddin 12 April 2014

from the colour of dreams, colour your own world I'll try, Tanya! Go on. And Mike Barret is a true source of inspiration and guidance.

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Mike Barrett 01 April 2014

Great ideas expressed here - the words however the grammar and spelling could be a bit more polished. You have a poet's heart! Cheers!

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Nika Mcguin 31 March 2014

the heart says to sit in the rain, eventually it relieves the pain. Apparently we have some likened views, I said something similar in my poem Nature of Self I also love these lines: sometimes when you are trapped in the game of bluffs, the things which can help you are the dreamy stuffs. something about the phrase dreamy stuffs lol I love that. ~Nika

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Twinkle Thomas 31 March 2014

very inspiring one...tanya..! !

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 28 March 2014

Stay calm and composed come what may against all odds.......Tanya............very inspiring one and very well composed.............

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Yash Shinde 27 March 2014

...u ve got the power to analyze the surroundings, give references to nature and other things, lovely

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Subhakanta Sahu 26 March 2014

I like it. buddha dev has said the world is full of sarrows, there is reason behind it, it's reason is passion and sarrows will vanish where there is no passion But I thik there is no end to passions so there is no end to sarrows. thanks. I support you with full of my heart.

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Salini Nair 26 March 2014

from the colour of dreams, colour your own world, , like it tanya.....

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Judah Daniel 19 March 2014

I just love it, it deals with the issues of life and it is an inspirational poem.

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Utsav Patel 07 March 2014

This is your best poem so far.. I love the way its written and the spirit... Keep it up dear.. :)

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V P Mahur 05 March 2014

Dear Tanya Lovely note of moral encouragement for those who are frustrated for some reasons Thanks But You are not posting your new poems for a long time why? I am posting at least 5 poems daily come on and have faith in your creativity. Thanks

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Abhishek Tiwari 04 March 2014

Nice.. Poem tanya.. U Have got a nice vision.. Keep it up... And keep writing..

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Hazel Durham 03 March 2014

Yes we have to be strong and move forward with love in our hearts and to be not afraid to be different, to have courage to make a good life for ourselves! Good write with so much wisdom!

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Amitava Sur 02 March 2014

Wise words consoling the wounded hearts, suggesting to look forward...... nice one

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Shraddha The Poetess 01 March 2014

very nice tanya.......................... with good rhyming...........very good.................... i also invite u to read mine

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 28 February 2014

Again a nice one..........tanya..... life full of things good and bad.....to adapt it to them and way to lead to the end is the wise way everyone should find...............well composed......thanks...... Now I request you to read my poems, ' A date with destiny' and ' A perfect blend' and comment on them..............

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