when happiness can't be won,
to satisfy ourselves we are the one.
sometimes things are not as we see,
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from the colour of dreams, colour your own world I'll try, Tanya! Go on. And Mike Barret is a true source of inspiration and guidance.
Great ideas expressed here - the words however the grammar and spelling could be a bit more polished. You have a poet's heart! Cheers!
the heart says to sit in the rain, eventually it relieves the pain. Apparently we have some likened views, I said something similar in my poem Nature of Self I also love these lines: sometimes when you are trapped in the game of bluffs, the things which can help you are the dreamy stuffs. something about the phrase dreamy stuffs lol I love that. ~Nika
Stay calm and composed come what may against all odds.......Tanya............very inspiring one and very well composed.............
...u ve got the power to analyze the surroundings, give references to nature and other things, lovely
I like it. buddha dev has said the world is full of sarrows, there is reason behind it, it's reason is passion and sarrows will vanish where there is no passion But I thik there is no end to passions so there is no end to sarrows. thanks. I support you with full of my heart.
from the colour of dreams, colour your own world, , like it tanya.....
I just love it, it deals with the issues of life and it is an inspirational poem.
This is your best poem so far.. I love the way its written and the spirit... Keep it up dear.. :)
Dear Tanya Lovely note of moral encouragement for those who are frustrated for some reasons Thanks But You are not posting your new poems for a long time why? I am posting at least 5 poems daily come on and have faith in your creativity. Thanks
Nice.. Poem tanya.. U Have got a nice vision.. Keep it up... And keep writing..
Yes we have to be strong and move forward with love in our hearts and to be not afraid to be different, to have courage to make a good life for ourselves! Good write with so much wisdom!
Wise words consoling the wounded hearts, suggesting to look forward...... nice one
very nice tanya.......................... with good rhyming...........very good.................... i also invite u to read mine
Again a nice one..........tanya..... life full of things good and bad.....to adapt it to them and way to lead to the end is the wise way everyone should find...............well composed......thanks...... Now I request you to read my poems, ' A date with destiny' and ' A perfect blend' and comment on them..............
A very good write indeed. Sure, happiness gives even more pleasure when it comes as a gift on our victory over the bad times.