Friday, November 14, 2008

Words Are Upset With Me... Comments

Rating: 4.7

Today I missed you so much
I did not know what to do
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I heard a sad voice told: ' I want to turn back time...' the regret is clear throughout the poem a good work! ! ! the pen releives pain! ! ! keep it up...10

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Serenity Prayer 24 November 2008

very sad poem. i understand the depth that its on this poem though. great job.

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 21 November 2008

Very sad! The poet has beautifully depicted the feeling of remorse one feels when one has done wrong in friendship, and than we do not have even guts face it as our lips are sewn. But we should say Sorry, if we have to. Hataw, also write about the other friend now!

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Blue Eyes 16 November 2008

it is a combination of words that came in their best place to be it is generally great i love the rhyme.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 16 November 2008

Words don't come easy nowdays but they can do a lot of wonders.........like sayin 'yes, I do'.Simple words mean for life! !

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<font color=black>Nagourta 15 November 2008

____________________________________________________________________ I made that line because I am so cool like the guy two comments below me! :) Your poem is succesfully sad, as usual. It pleases me to read them. It is healthy to express sadness like this, it makes for a good outlet methinks! :) :) ____________________________________________________________________ Take care friend!

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Aijaz Asif 15 November 2008

true friends do not get angry they get upset for a while after some time they forget bout what happened and returns with a smile so don't worry your friend will return soon and its an impressive write with very deep thoughts and regrets....thanks 10++++

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Sarwar Chowdhury 15 November 2008

Remembering, old saying- 'A friend in need is a friend indeed' Love, friendship a basic need. Friends need to understand, if not, then, about turn and left right teft march forword..... seeing this ya heartfelt verses, if ya friend do not turn back to u, then, just 'miss call' me, I will fly all over the world and catch ya friend alike angry Eagle and at a light speed back to u! ! ! ! ! ! :) 10++++and A+++

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Ency Bearis 14 November 2008

every true friends listen..and understand if you are upset..and never got upset by words only..they balnce their understanding..good concept..A10 Ency Bearis

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Anjali Sinha 14 November 2008

A slip of the tongue is not the error of the mind so dont worry my beautiful---he will understand you cauze true friends are understanding too ++++10 love anju

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 14 November 2008

true friends don't get upset by words, true friends listen with their hearts... Andy 10

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