Saturday, March 26, 2016

Words Are Such Perfect Traitors Comments

Rating: 4.8

They rise in me
Like large waves
Overpowering me
I surrender to them
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Bharati Nayak
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Bharati Nayak 16 October 2024

Thank you everybody who have left their valuable impressions on the poem.

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Bharati Nayak 16 October 2024

(Part-2) On first October I was in a flight on my way to USA.During my stay there I was unable to log in to PoemHunter and could not read even HomePage.That is the reason I have not replied to any of the comments.

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Bharati Nayak 16 October 2024

Till now I was not aware that this poem was selected Member Poem of the Day on First October 2022.I knew it when I read comments with congratulatory messages today.(Part -1)

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Rob Lamberton 30 December 2022

I've known others who believe they possess the lock and key to my own words insisting on telling me what my words mean…at such times I've certainly felt my words had betrayed me.

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Rob Lamberton 30 December 2022

I wonder at dreams and thoughts that escape before I can capture them with words! Perhaps they are better running free!

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Ruta Mohapatra 02 October 2022

Congrats on POD! I can relate to this poem...

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Ramesh T A 01 October 2022

Best Wishes to the Poet!

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Okim Otu 01 October 2022

Congrats on being members POD for today

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Richard Wlodarski 01 October 2022

Bharati, your incredibly beautiful and moving poem pays great tribute to a poet who had inspired so many poets on PH. Your poem is so absolutely worthy of POD! Heartiest of Congrats on receiving this honour!

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Sandra Feldman 01 October 2022

Correct! Loved it.

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Sandra Feldman 01 October 2022

Absolutely and so beautifully correct. This poem has all my admiration and is so magically

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And we all miss the wit and wisdom of our departed friend Daniel Brick. My prayers for her.

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My prayers for him! (Sorry for printing error)

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Congratulations to my dear friend Bharati on selection of this poem as MPOD. A most deserving recognition. Made a revisit today on pod. It is a rejuvenating experience for any poet. Enjoyed.

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Kim Barney 01 October 2022

Very well done, Bharati! Congrats for having this chosen as MPOD!

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Rebecca Navarre 21 August 2022

Beautifully, beautifully expressed! .. Oh, to hold them but they can slip away like dreams floating across the sky! ..

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Smoky Hoss 21 August 2022

Stunning, beautiful poem. Words are wayward friends, here and gone, always moving onward.

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Rebecca Navarre 21 August 2022

Deeply, deeply beautiful thoughts! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Bri Edwards 18 July 2022

Yes, those pesky, traitorous words, especially the ones which change their spelling, change their meanings, and change their pronunciation just to be mean to me! ! bri : )

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 February 2022

Words are such slithery ermin!

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 February 2022

Made a revisit today. Just enjoyed reading this gem once again

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