Wednesday, February 13, 2019

Words Are Birds On Wings Comments

Rating: 5.0

Words are birds on wings, ideas that bring,
Ideas brought, haply they hop to wing.
Freely thence the songs soar
As free birds, words no more,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Aniruddha Pathak 15 February 2019

Thank you so much Rose Marie, reading thru your feedback one feels you seriously think thru the subject and give very relevant comments.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 February 2019

A wonderful limerick. Great rhyming throughout this write. And with a meaningful message.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 February 2019

Words are so vital in communication. Without them, we can hardly understand each other. Yes, words are birds on wings. Sometimes faster than a sound. As what you said in your Poet's Notes, words mislead, restrict and limit. So very true. Yet, still words may vary depending on the receiver's mind.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 14 February 2019

Words are birds on wings! Wonderful title of a wonderful poem. Full score Aniruddha ji

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 February 2019

If this old man's memory is not failing, you are a first-timer to my poems. Welcome and thank you for some liberal comments.

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