Friday, May 4, 2018

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Rating: 3.0

As my words fly out my larynx
I never knew they have got a body
When I thought there is no fix-
They created a man with a body
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Ishmael Mabhiza
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Robert Murray Smith 05 May 2018

Your poem needs a rewrite with correct spelling and grammar.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 May 2018

Dear Ishmael, such an excellent epistle....10+++

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