Words Comments

It was so clear to visualize the many words one has to absorb in your trade. I too have written one on words. Hope you have the time to look it up. Adeline

Hello Taxi Dave and greetings from a hackney driving poet in Wicklow, Ireland like your poem Words, and the others about Lucia and life at sea. Try some where the lines don't rhyme, as this sometimes seems forced. also read each line out loud, this will show where a line is a word or half a word too long and the 'music' of the poem suffers. maybe we'll talk some more about writing while waiting on a fare. keep writing. thanks