Words Comments

A clever universal write.++10

Very clever, the use of typically opposing thoughts such as deserted and life, and dunes with oasis and blooming. Such strong contrast grabs the reader's attention and makes him (her) think. Very interesting picture you have painted here, Rini.

Beautiful philosophical poem nicely presented. Thanks.

Wonderfully penned poem Rini. Words as grains of sand to form oasis in mind.10

Great poem about words.

Words arelike sand grains In this vast deserted life Where it forms dunes and oasis to bloom your mind The poet, you have told everything about life through these few lines. Thank You!

Work of an active imagination, well encapsulated and elegantly brought forth with insight. A lovely creation Rini. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.