This is a wonderfully conceived and written poem.. Most artists have experiences that they explain through their words, but what we often FAIL to realise is the painful process of CULTIVATING THE WORDS that turn up at the paper.. You, in just three lines, show us a glimpse into that process. A fine poem. Marvellous.. Thank you for sharing.
Blooming in a desert is a true act of greatness. Excellently expressed my friend!
Great imagery! ................ But let me rewrite; Cutting words watered by tears in fecund land! A 10
Dil kahe jo sach hai wahi Magar zabaan tak pahunche to Kya baat hogi.... Beautiful sharing.....thank you :)
Amazing! ! ! ! Dil ki lagi nahi dillagi, ye samajh le jahan....10++++
Reaching every heart... Dil se jo baat nikalti hai asar rakhti hai Par nahi taqat.e parwaaz magar rakhti hai.
A nice poem on words, your words are precious.