Living bright amidst the horizon
The rays of gold thus had shone,
Dreams of happiness, roving mind
All that's dark, been left behind.
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Lovely expression in a beautiful short poem with nice rhymes. Carry on with the good work!
Awww i loved it! brilliant! THe style you write in is lovely...beautiful! .
Awww i loved it! brilliant! THe style you write in is lovely...beautiful! .
describes a great thing in very less words................really as wordsworth said your poems are made of powerful words that create a long-lasting effect on mind
Nice Words! Very simple, You are mine and I love you.The expression is pregnant with meaning.I loved the write. Thanks for sharing.With regards.
Wow! Awesome! like a child i feel excited reading your rhythmic display of WORDS hopping on one foot. even though its abt LOVE.
Good job! The last line is so simple but straight into multiple hearts.
A beautiful love poem... you are lucky to feel this bliss...
This is such a beautiful poem with great imagery that embraces the reader with each word, inspired write!
superb..excellent work...the last lines are so beautiful... »so close«
a remarkable piece sir each word captivating and profound....an incredible poem from a incredible poet i love it thank you for sharing, love payal
As colorful as rainbow. It can clear the rain-clouds of the mind's sky.Very nice.
I liked it a lot from simple title to the creativity.