Wednesday, October 3, 2012

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Rating: 5.0

Living bright amidst the horizon
The rays of gold thus had shone,
Dreams of happiness, roving mind
All that's dark, been left behind.
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Indranil Bhaduri
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Tanveer Sharma 17 November 2012

I liked it a lot from simple title to the creativity.

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Bob Brown 31 October 2012

Lovely expression in a beautiful short poem with nice rhymes. Carry on with the good work!

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Scarlett Cleo Nightingale 30 October 2012

Awww i loved it! brilliant! THe style you write in is lovely...beautiful! .

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Scarlett Cleo Nightingale 30 October 2012

Awww i loved it! brilliant! THe style you write in is lovely...beautiful! .

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Yash Shinde 19 October 2012

describes a great thing in very less words................really as wordsworth said your poems are made of powerful words that create a long-lasting effect on mind

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Chandra Thiagarajan 11 October 2012

Nice Words! Very simple, You are mine and I love you.The expression is pregnant with meaning.I loved the write. Thanks for sharing.With regards.

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Persian Khushi 09 October 2012

Wow! Awesome! like a child i feel excited reading your rhythmic display of WORDS hopping on one foot. even though its abt LOVE.

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Hans Vr 09 October 2012

Nice expression of emotions in melodious verses. Good poem

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Nurain Ali-balogun 07 October 2012

Wow, that's beautiful...and the end, brilliant.

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Rigzin Namgyal 07 October 2012

..beautiful..as you put it..eternal words..

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A B 06 October 2012

gud 1...................................

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Aung Si 06 October 2012

Good job! The last line is so simple but straight into multiple hearts.

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Lovable Wisdom 05 October 2012

This poem speaks so clear to me............ loved it

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Samithree Rajapaksha 05 October 2012

A beautiful love poem... you are lucky to feel this bliss...

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Hazel Durham 05 October 2012

This is such a beautiful poem with great imagery that embraces the reader with each word, inspired write!

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Sridatta Gupta 04 October 2012

very beautiful.loved it.

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So Close 04 October 2012

superb..excellent work...the last lines are so beautiful... »so close«

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Payal Parande 04 October 2012

a remarkable piece sir each word captivating and profound....an incredible poem from a incredible poet i love it thank you for sharing, love payal

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Neela Nath Das 04 October 2012

As colorful as rainbow. It can clear the rain-clouds of the mind's sky.Very nice.

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Rafique Farooqi 04 October 2012

Very nice bright love poem, enlightening the inner

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Indranil Bhaduri

Indranil Bhaduri

Kolkata, India
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