I've drifted for these sixty years,
And never really known,
Where life would lead eventually,
Ere the bird of time had flown.
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Your Poem is wonderful. An open mind collects thought and you captured this one very well.......10
Very good indeed but the words you used some might not know or be able to pronounce correctly but even witht hat its still a great read with nice flow and well written lines
If I was able to give more then 10 this would be one poem I would make sure recieved more. It was an easy read with great flow. Just a good poem.
Excellent.... And I can empathise. I've oft had to scribble words down in the middle of the night. A definite 10. George
Excellent write sir.