Friday, October 24, 2008

Words Comments

Rating: 5.0

I've drifted for these sixty years,
And never really known,
Where life would lead eventually,
Ere the bird of time had flown.
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Frank Halliwell
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Jeff Pua 08 April 2010

Excellent write sir.

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Linda Moore 24 October 2008

Your Poem is wonderful. An open mind collects thought and you captured this one very well.......10

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Silence Dogood 24 October 2008

Very good indeed but the words you used some might not know or be able to pronounce correctly but even witht hat its still a great read with nice flow and well written lines

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Tj Becker 24 October 2008

If I was able to give more then 10 this would be one poem I would make sure recieved more. It was an easy read with great flow. Just a good poem.

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George Bernard-bloody-shaw 24 October 2008

Excellent.... And I can empathise. I've oft had to scribble words down in the middle of the night. A definite 10. George

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Frank Halliwell

Frank Halliwell

Hamilton Canada
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