Saturday, January 28, 2006

Wordless Comments

Rating: 4.8

Grappling in my head
For the word to say,
When my mind goes blank.
Like a barren desert
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Julia Klimenova
COMMENTS
Suchoon Mo 11 June 2006

a soundless word a wordless song the desert wind sings in silence Suchoon

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Anna Russell 05 June 2006

Julia, sometimes when I read you I find it so amazing that English isn't your first language. Most native English speakers would give anything to be able to write something like this. Hugs Anna xxx

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Brian Dorn 20 April 2006

Julia, I can certainly relate. Sometimes a thought or idea will come out of nowhere, other times, as much as you search, you end up with nothing. Good write! Brian

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Sandra Fowler 14 April 2006

When the song is freely offered, someone will hear its silent message. Warm regards, Sandra

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Dana Tyrrell 26 March 2006

i love this poem and i can truly identify with it....its like writer's block...personified warm regards -Dana

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Chuck Audette 22 February 2006

Very clever poem, I like the parallel between the poetic flow and water in a desert, and meanings understood in silence. - chuck

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Courtney Elmlinger 12 February 2006

Julia~ I found myself really relating to this poem. So often I feel as though the muse has hold of me...yet somehow I drift back and forth in reason...They say silence can be a positive inward reflection...but sometimes silence frightens me...This poem speaks to me through each line and your voice is so gracefully audible! :) I admire your style, your expression with words :)

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William Jackson 12 February 2006

Precise word choice, haunting meaning. Excellent!

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Gina Onyemaechi 06 February 2006

So rich and imaginative as your words are, Julia, how can I not hear them? How can anyone not? I like your style, Julia.

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Willow Moon Pearce 05 February 2006

I like it very much, you have thoughts like me...............regards..................willow

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Tan Pratonix 03 February 2006

Good poem, terse and to-the-point. Worthy of its high rating. But can't you write Word as 'word'? Word with a capital W has a different connotation. Regards Tan PS. You havent seen all my poems. Pl do; will be grateful.

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Peter A. Crowther 28 January 2006

Nice poem with atmosphere and not a word wasted

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Julia Klimenova

Julia Klimenova

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