Lachrymosity covers the place,
Two burning embers suddenly freeze,
Mocking bird cries, light disappears,
Fog envelopes, shuts the blooming ears.
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This is decidedly one of your best pieces - - - thought given to wordsmithing - and brought off well - - like the finish too....... and the title speaks for itself - - first rate read and 10 from Fay...xx
what a nice poem..... keep on writing kim...