Sunday, February 1, 2009

Wordless Talk Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lachrymosity covers the place,
Two burning embers suddenly freeze,
Mocking bird cries, light disappears,
Fog envelopes, shuts the blooming ears.
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Juneil Sechico
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J.r Cuyam 15 October 2009

what a nice poem..... keep on writing kim...

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Fay Slimm 03 February 2009

This is decidedly one of your best pieces - - - thought given to wordsmithing - and brought off well - - like the finish too....... and the title speaks for itself - - first rate read and 10 from Fay...xx

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Juneil Sechico

Juneil Sechico

Bayabas, Cagayan de Oro City
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