Monday, February 24, 2020

Word That Killed Two ~ Riječ Koja Je Ubila Dvoje Comments

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Word that killed two

I didn't know You are a good shooter.
Your word had a clear objective
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Jankovic Zoran
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Mahtab Bangalee 03 March 2020

that word, in me, killed two: Your Lie and You./// that's the wise poetic words

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Mihaela Pirjol 26 February 2020

This poem has the similar sharpness, as a tanka in Japanese poetry: it expresses immediately the 'fury' of the animal heart, bruised with love. I love the way it is composed!

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Jankovic Zoran 28 February 2020

Thanks Mihaela. I never wrote tanka and I know you love me. I'll try in your honor to write it.

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