Word that killed two
I didn't know You are a good shooter.
Your word had a clear objective
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This poem has the similar sharpness, as a tanka in Japanese poetry: it expresses immediately the 'fury' of the animal heart, bruised with love. I love the way it is composed!
Thanks Mihaela. I never wrote tanka and I know you love me. I'll try in your honor to write it.
that word, in me, killed two: Your Lie and You./// that's the wise poetic words