Friday, September 4, 2009

Word Of Autumn. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The colder wind today brought word of change.
With Autumn on its way soft blossoms shrink.
Berries dropp their plump hued heads in phases,
And shorter days pull Autumn to its brink.
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Fay Slimm
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Michael Grogan 24 November 2009

Autumn is my favorite season and your poem summed it up beautifully and perfectly. what a gift you have!

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Tom Balch 18 September 2009

Autumn, the colourful season, a wonderful poem Fay 10/10 regards Tom

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Bob Blackwell 17 September 2009

Your description though short draws a vivid picture, I could almost feel the Autumn chill. Bob 10/10 aand +

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Rani Turton 10 September 2009

Lovely evocation of approaching autumn.

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C. P. Sharma 10 September 2009

You measure up autumns beauty in a glance In its mellow fruitfulness and warmth your words dance. CP

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yes, it is on its way........... im heading south soon. wonderful fay

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Aziz Alkaabi 05 September 2009

Blazing words woven with a blessed skill.

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Carol Gall 04 September 2009

words that sing the praises of autumn 10

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Bob Gibson 04 September 2009

The harvest is in and stashed away, preserves for a winters day light is fading, , leaves are falling, daylight saving, winters craving a lovely time of the year Fay, put your feet up bonny lass!

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Sandra Fowler 04 September 2009

A beautiful preview of autumn with its frosty panes and flickering fires. Reading you is always a rewarding experience, dear friend.10/10. Love, SandraX

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Ian Bowen 04 September 2009

Fay, always a strange time, that period of the end of Summer and the start of Autumn. You have put all the images together in a very readable piece of work. 10/10 Regards, Ian

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Fay Slimm

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