Saturday, May 12, 2007

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I tagged along with the group
the beer was payed for, they insisted I gulp it down
I had no choice but to sip it, down, down it went
the bitter taste stuck with me
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Shane Clawson
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Vino Venitas 05 June 2012

I liked this poem, the message was clear and your words were nice. Reading it was smooth, so this has become the top piece of the week on my website. Good job, keep it up.

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