Tuesday, August 16, 2011

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A heart that changes
Which foot to set
First upon the ground
Each time it walks
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Stefanie Fontker
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David Beckham 17 August 2011

this creates an image of an object/idea that is neither moving nor is it still. there is an element of suspence that invites an even deeper interpretation which all adds to a good read. tfs 10/10

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Allemagne Roßmann 16 August 2011

Words which are silent have its voice now as poems.'What one does not listen, world listens.Words of choice expressed well.

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