Monday, August 31, 2015

Woody The Terrier-Ist Comments

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His hate is vile
He barks out little spittle of bile
Over clean windows, brand new
Breath so rancid, the steam
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Della Perry
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Bri Edwards 18 September 2015

the ending brought a muffled chuckle to my throat. that IS better than a terrier-ist at my throat! the mail carrier, I presume. yes, DO keep the door closed and in good condition! the mail must go through! or is it a newspaper deliveryman? when an American dog whimpers, I think it is sadness or pain. me too! or the threat of a chore from my home-boss when I’d rather be on PH. in the U.S. I would say “a good thing there is a strong door”. “good job” must be “black country talk”! I love the poem and it shall go to MyPoemList, to sit, ignored perhaps for years [until I can no longer compose or type, but I can still read]. bri :)

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