Monday, February 12, 2018

Woods Walking Comments

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Woods walking, walking
Slow but irreversible
With direction walking
Come here the bell in the
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Emmanuel George Cefai
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Daniel 12 February 2018

Nature is vividly alive and vibrant in this poem but there is a strange energy at work which alters natural patterns. But it doesn't make chaos rather a new order is imposed and despite an undercurrent of menace (which is more in me than in the scene itself) the new order prevails. But I worry about the THE RAGE OF THE SUN which coild disrupt the poise.

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Emmanuel George Cefai

Emmanuel George Cefai

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