Thoughts, creamily flowing
Adhesively cling
Around all the places
Discovered last Spring
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When I was young, in the military and stationed in Holland, I had the pleasure of enjoying a few trysts with local girls in the pastures of the farm country just outside the of the quaint, old towns. Your charming poem brought those old memories back to me quite vividly. Your fine poem is tersely written, yet quite descriptive with excellent detail of that unforgettable place where love was shared, perhaps even for the very first time. The poem's concluding verse is so beautifully expressed, and sadly, so true for a lot of us years later. Carl.
Hi Fay. Trying to find a good early morning read and I found it. this one flows so well and takes you to the woodland.10 for sure. Regards Dave T.
Very nice. It would be a sad poem were those joys felt not so strongly presented. A very feeling piece
A delightful elegy to times remembered and revisited.