Friday, January 29, 2016

Woodland Muse Comments

Rating: 4.5

I heard a cryptic melody,
and knew it held a clue.
To some it was a muted hush,
but others surely knew.
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Barry Middleton
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Pamela Sinicrope 29 January 2016

Beautiful poem. I like the simple flowing rhyme scheme... You captured many picturesque scenes within the woods and I especially like the reference to the honey in the giant tree so sweetness might survive- lovely meaning /metaphor.

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Barry Middleton 29 January 2016

Thank you. I am glad you liked it.

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