Wondrous World Comments

Thanks without your poem i cannot do my assignment😂😂😂

Thank you Pilo..I accept your suggestion..I will change that words from sick instead of no sick!

You have conjured a wondrous world with your wondrous words. Though I do concur with Sunny Rose and her suggestion or try I wish, she keep her calves from sick

nice and amazing.you have shown your intention in a nice written.

Wonderful poem, it has so much wonderful things to see if we able to deep see inside a simple life..great idea! _Unwritten Soul

nice thoughts, nice poem, not enough good thoughts, if there were, the world would not be so troubled

Pretty poem! You can compose the usual events with amazing idea.I like this.I appreciate u.

caffeine snake, atomic ants are different kind of imagination! Could you write about Myanmar?

Very interesting.

Grateful heart! ! Try to know concealing of natural phenomena!

But by the way your poem is very good you gave an image of a wondrous world

Happiest girl is better i think. And may she help her calves 'so sick' not 'no sick' i think