Wondrous Love Comments

Beauteaous wording! significant! 10+

The first love always haunts.........it is an ubiquitous feeling.................A poem with beautiful rhymes and rhythm of it's own........Good Write...

Stunning and touching, so filled with love, but with a touch of sadness. Such a wonderful feeling... love... it does come and go, so wonderful to feel the affections of another, so hard to let it go. Beautiful and amazing as all your works.

what a sweet and wonderful piece... this is a very sweet love story....really a WONDROUS LOVE.... bringing back sweet memories.... i love this.....

puppy love is the best..coz it is so innocent and not materialistic................well penned

Wow I remember my first love with my ex I was 19 and he was 20 but I realize was a jackass, but I moved on, and focusing on school. So someday will find my right, but not right now. This is a very good poem Mr. Greenwolfe.

This is beautiful... and I know somday I'll be writting somethig similar.. Love, true love, only touch us ONCE... and we may love again.. but never love the same way.. lovely. best wishes, ana

Wow, the flow is beautiful. It felt like I was living once again sir, inspirational.

I want that love. thsi is a great piece bro. absolutely fantastic. loved the flow and dored the message

This poem captivated me, pulling me through memories and time. how bittersweet. thank you.

wonderful i love the imagines its so pure.. This poem runs smoothly i love the beginning too it opens the whole poem with so much love.. great write Krista

How beautiful some folk never get to feel that way so you are fortunate and have expressed it wonderfully. Kind regards Ann

a really heartfelt poem. She is your beautiful soul mate. You told a romantic, free flowing story. Karin Anderson

i am deeply touched by this lines of yours....'The moments of my life since then, Became these lonely years. As sadness seized my loving heart And soaked it with my tears.' Your sadness was already soaked with your tears, and tears will flow and gone dried.It is better then to have it all wrap up with inner joy, and then..and then..and then..you can move forward and stay focus of whatever you wanted to do..Never to look back, but go ahead.I love the presentation of your write, from the beginning to end.There never was a dull moment, and you made the readers know the flow of the piece. Thank you so much for giving me the rare chance of letting me know a glimpse of your life. Oh, well, that is life..and it is only temporary..we will have a beautiful life there in our permanent home. Take care of, you my friend, and know that i care for you, too. Love and hugs, Meggie

oww, what an extraordinary love...tt was long ago but still fresh in your mind, , , , love comes and go........when it comes, seems you owned the: sky, moon, stars, ocean seas, air, wind and all the impossible things, ... but when it goes, all of the above disappear...that is life dear greeney..when you lost your real yours, seems you're lost too and take note, no one comes better than the first..i don't know if this is agreeable to you, .... we should smile for the past, coz we learned out of that, , be careful for the next, might we pass the same feelings which come and disappear.. you're so good in writing words in honest feelings.....so, this is your revealation ha? ...uhum.....that was 1962....how about the 1963, ......70......80...90's? ...hpe it will come soon...hehehehehhehehe...lav ya...thanks dear greeney....

When something moves the reader in this way, it matters not of the meter or rhyme so much because it holds its integrity and honesty intact without needing the aid of either This is brilliant A + Love duncan X

Very nice poem on first and only love. Well penned. Jim

A love for all eternity..sometimes one just know's don't they? Mo