Monday, March 22, 2010

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I see you everyday
I want you to walk my way
but I have to push you away, and stay tall
Because I need to protect my heart
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Caitlin McGonigal
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Ro'ya Abdulaal 22 March 2010

I really enjoyed reading it, lovely and sensuous, I loved the metaphor in the last line, loved the end rhyme and the smooth flow, beautifully written, well done R

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Caitlin McGonigal

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