Wonders Of Science! Comments

Very good👍

thank u it has been useful to me in science week celebrations in our school

Commendable poem.

Very nice poem 😀😃😁

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Very nice poem😊☺

Nice super duper happy with me for my family

Thanks a lot. Its Brilliant really.

Wow Really nice .I love it. Thank you

What a great and true poem

True poem

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Awsm poem ... I really like it ... Thank you #TAPASHYADAS for making such wonderful poem ...

It is a wonderfull poem

well constructed poem..majestic

written well.may I suggest you trim the lines and shorten your poem so that the theme and logic are maintained lucidly and precisely and readers don't get bored by similar repetitive stanzas or verses going off the track. I think you have a tendency to write longer poems and pen all that you know. This tendency may have to be curtailed in the longer run. good work already. keep writing as they come.all the best in poetry. but it will take quite some time.

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This is called scientific-art of words.................. well painted, Tapashya! ............. loved it..............keep it up!