Wonders Of Nature.Chocolate Hills Comments

if there is anything sweeter than Ging, it must be a chocolate kiss; make mine Hershey's! i wonder if the illustration is a photo or a painting. hmm? here is my Kiss for readers: Kiss With A Twist.......[marriage; Temptation; Humor] - Poem by Bri Edwards My wife was out of town for a week. It was time to have a treat. So I took a cab to my favorite bistro to have myself a bite to eat. It was as I prepared to return home that I glanced at a corner table. I tried to pry my eyes away from her, but found I was not able. What had caught my eye was candlelight reflecting from a silver gown, worn by one forbidden to me since the aisle I walked my new bride down. Inside the gown was one of the sweetest gifts God to men has given, a young innocent, creamy-smooth-skinned morsel to which my body was driven. I tried with all my might to resist this newly-found temptation, But, alas, I believe it was too much dinner wine that was leading me to damnation. The craving was too much for me; I felt like a child in Toy Land. I warily approached her table, looked about, then took her in my hand. I undressed her with my eyes during our ride to the hotel. That I was in danger of disrupting my marriage, I could surely tell. I ordered up a suite on the top floor, for myself and my forbidden sweet, but I did not allow myself to indulge, until I'd pulled up our bed sheet. My mouth was watering with desire, my lips were slightly held apart. At last I consumed what my wife had forbidden, but which for years I'd craved with all my heart. Until that moment she'd remained enclosed, in her silver gown. I removed her wrapper and pulled her to my mouth, sucked repeatedly, and finally swallowed her down. (Nov.2012) [....alternate ending, starting at then took her in my hand....]: The ride through the dark streets was anxiety-filled, yet quiet. I could wait no longer. I undressed her there and popped her in my mouth. There went a twelve-year diet. (Nov.2012) (The KISS was a foil- wrapped hershey kiss.) ===================================== bri :)

What a lovley discription and loving the thought of choclate hills...yummy....great pic to go with it... Annette

Wonderful depiction of wonder of nature. Interesting to read. Thanks for sharing....10

Beauty! ! With the wonders of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.