How could I?
How could I make you feel so light
that I could take us to a dive
over the clouds of rain or snow?
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Comments from PF I like the sweeping movement, the gathering emotion and passion in this romantic poem... 14 Jun 2011 by eleanor prince The surprise ending dear Elena is the pivot which makes me re-read this beautiful piece over again. There is such a poetic flow of love's pure intentions cascading towards that final line. Breath taking. 14 Jun 2011 by Fay Slimm | lovely verses and flows like the river to seek its own level of love, nice piece 14 Jun 2011 by Ency Bearis | Reply river of love awesome 14 Jun 2011 by carol Absolutely beautiful! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing 15 Aug 2011 by Dorothy A. Holmes
Lovely portrayal of mighty spiritual experience that is love - a voyage of pure bliss, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Elena and do remain blessed.