Wonders Comments

i liked the way you observe the life around you and volunteer to reflect on your thoughts there on...good piece, Samantha...well framed lines...10

Samantha - I like the direction of your thoughts. Only fifteen but already focused on life's true meaning. And you say it so well. You may like my 'If I Should Lose May Soul' poem. Blessings - Cheryl

wow this poem is so hard hitting. at the beginning the wonderings sound so innocent, but then you expose that they are really so trivial and self involved. Thanks for sharing and keep writing more. God bless Alice