Wonders Comments

.......................GREAT! ................... :)

Daniel, what about having 'WONDERS' in the new compilation? * * ebook to be published at the end of January [or more probably in February '17] Let me know

From the first lines I understood that it is a sight of a person travelling. Because it's just watching and description of what you see. it is unburdened with pain or some great ideas that usually bother us when we sit at one place as a stone, It reminded me some poems of late Brodsky, only in last stanza - you return to you favorite images of ancient times and flight to Cosmos from there (common to Joseph too!) interesting - what do you mean by Total Realization...?

I have been taken in a lovely and lively journey through all these beautiful, peaceful and vivid imagery as I was reading this interesting poem; I felt as being part of it...such an extraordinary feeling!

I like how you have this poem written in different parts. That's something I haven't seen before. Your descriptions are excellent, as is your imagery. In my opinion, the only truly important opinion is your own. If you like it you need no ones liking but your own. Great job!