Over land I pass and go
Over water I sink and leave
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i thought i was very good, somtimes you just want to leave life altogether and to go a place with no worries, u explained it very well! !
jodi, you take us on a journey through your writing...it's a gift...thanks for sharing
Very good, thought provoking poem. The otherwise normal words describing emotion come together to form complex imagery. I can see into this poem. very good