Thursday, March 24, 2005

Wondering Comments

Rating: 4.3

Over land I pass and go
Over water I sink and leave
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jodi right
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Bkhj Chen 07 April 2005

Very good, thought provoking poem. The otherwise normal words describing emotion come together to form complex imagery. I can see into this poem. very good

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Amy Taylor 05 April 2005

i thought i was very good, somtimes you just want to leave life altogether and to go a place with no worries, u explained it very well! !

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Renee Lewis 30 March 2005

jodi, you take us on a journey through your writing...it's a gift...thanks for sharing

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