Thursday, October 14, 2010

Wondering Star Comments

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I am like a wondering star
Ever wondering,
From one planet to another.
Searching and seeking
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David Oladipupo Olorunshola
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Bri Edwards 26 May 2014

i think you mean to use the word wandering, not wondering. of course you may mean wondering, but later you use wodering (another misspelling?) AND wandering within consecutive lines. and uniqueness, not uniquiness (a misspelliing i guess) . well, after finishing the last stanza i am almost convinced that you DO mean wondering sometimes and wandering other times. but i hope you can see why i was trying to correct you at first. :) i wish i could find my soul mate with the characteristics you have mentioned. well, here in the u.s., each of my four wives [one wife at a time, unlike in parts of africa] has been able to fulfill the role somewhat. thanks for sharing. bri :)

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