Friday, May 19, 2017

Wondering If It's All Worth It Comments

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Selling their souls to the devil
In order to attain earthly riches
Sacrificing their children to the occult
In order to attain earthly wealth
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Jefferson Carter 19 May 2017

Qiniso, you shouldn't ask rhetorical questions in a poem. Of course, it's not worth it! You need to start reading lots of good contemporary poetry in English if you're going to learn that it's most often better to show in your verse than to tell. Check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell how you like it. Yrs, JC

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Qiniso Mogale 19 May 2017

I thank you for the critique

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