Wondering Forwords Comments

Let it hover As long as it wishes Till it gathers enough water For a surge of downpour....brilliant poetic expression. Loved this wonderful poem. Top score!

This poem is beautiful.

Emotions, inspiration, life, rain, and writing shall lead the poetess to a beautiful new story, I am sure.

A surge of downpour! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

through the clouds with you, 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ but there is no voting booth

I felt like I was wandering and drifting and wondering

you captured the essence

I love this poem. It is such a wonderful and poetic expression of the patient waiting for the right words to enter our mind, our heart and soul. But then, when we manage to make it quiet enough inside, the clouds pour the words as a streaming rain. Such a good and nice image.

Every thought is wonderful and every minute thought carries words of expression. Every minute sequence of emotion carries meaning. You have beautifully presented your thought in a skilled manner.

Very good insight into how poems get born, and well said as well

clouds gathered here on the ether rains are getting ready to fall down storms are in frolicsome mood my love in happiest movement of facebook gossiping I'm and my pen how wonderful alone by seeing far dark-blue barking sky ...../// beautiful poem

hi, bharati! i'm waiting for a surge or downpour myself. i haven't written much in a while. but no matter. particularly with the poems that make me marvel at what has come through me, i feel like a channel or receptacle. so there's not much to do but wait. hoping you're well in all ways, glen

ma'am your poetry and comments i have noticed r always extraordinary

An inspirational poem on emotion and nature having nice diction has been incisively delineated and amazingly shared. Thanks for sharing.10

How thoughts are changed in words and how words are arranged in a poem, the poetess has nicely described it A lovely poem by Bharati Ji..

Bharati, such an inspiring write....................

Let the rain fall, let inspiration tranform into words! Marvelous poem!

Blow away the words, good write