Tuesday, May 19, 2009

Wondering Comments

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Some days i sit around the house wondering were he at
Some days i be wondering if he still love me
I be wondering everyday about my boyfriend
I wonder like on days were not together i wonder if he cheating
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Jessica Williams
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Jack Price 25 May 2009

This would be a great poem if it was told like a story: Some days i sit around the house wondering where is he at or if he still loves me? I wonder when were not together is he cheating? Just a suggestion, let your poems flow more and they will be enjoyable for many to read on this site. Still: Keep that pen to the paper and keep writing: please email me when you can. I see much potential in your writing..... J. L. Price

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Overflowing words from your heart cordially.10. Thanks.

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