Handsome man ponder at my masculine size.
I'm not huge or toned to appeal to the judges eyes,
but when I begin to tell them
they think I'm telling lies.
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When I read the title, I grinned. To me, it was funny and cool. It's a great poem. In the same writing way that Maya used, but a great poem all the same. Made me laugh. Very cool.9-10 =-)
A very nice write about the wonderful man. I am happy that you were so inspired by Maya Angelou to write such a piece as this. It was so boldly written with such manly and not macho attributes. An excellent write with a good sense of humor.
Well Ill be damned this is just brilliant...had me strutting behind you go...wooo...grins...kidding...really enjoyable read I can tell you that much...cant wait to read more of your stuff...10
a macho man paradoxically portrayed but sweet.....................
Wonderful poem :) I can just see a person writing about children inspired by Maya now: P
this is an awesome poem i love a man who is confident but not cocky
wonderfull. but the credit goes to 'Maya Angelou' who is an inspiration to all of us. but still one needs talent to bring such an orinal copy. congrats voted10 surya
lovely! Such a wonderful poem and such a beautiful adaptation of Maya Angelou's poem 'Phenomenal Woman.' Maya Angelou is my favorite poet too.