Wonder Why Comments

You aren't the only one who wonders that. I have wondered that all my life. You have a very good poem here. i like it very much.

Wow this is crazy i myself have a write very similar 2 this, this is so relatable. i enjoy ur work keep it up. quite a brilliant write

Love may seem like a fight between what you ant and what you need. If the man you love is the cause of your heart paining, yearning to be free of love, then maybe its meant to be. But love is also good for you. It heals you, cares for you, protects. So don't lose hope, for love has its up and down. And not just love for your soul mate, but also your love for you family and friends. Great work and please continue writing =D

'Why...., Why....., Why....? ? ? ? ' Beautifully expressed. The imagery is good but the middle discussion regarding being found and/or finding the 'right' guy who plays Prince Charming for you is not exactly fitting though it seems the meat of the wondering by being placed in the middle, for it is not a 'why' question. The questions, most essentially the 'WHY? ' itself, are common, mankind forever searching for and/or thinking he finds the answers to that basic, 'Why? '. Loneliness, being unloved, selfishly wanting to be treated the way we desire, wanting another life than we've been given, are all common temptations, beautifully expressed herein. Nicely done.

The good and your first poem in Poem hunter...keep it up Dianna, in young age you know what you like, writing! ! so keep it up more...About the poem, dont keep wondering why if you read all people writing you will realise that not only you many people stuck in problems, same problem big problem, complex one etc...so this is a real life is about..A small bird thinks it's hard to live in nest waiting for mother bird come...soon she will find how hard to learn how to fly, when she learn how to fly..she find difficult to hunt foods...so Dianna, in young age never give up love yourself first(but not being selfish) ...keep writing and keep positive :) Talent to share not to keep or hide_Unwritten Soul