Wonder, The World Seems Wonder, Comments

Poem contains a good idea, however, there is too much repetition and it detracts from the quality and rhythm of the poem. I do like it except for that. Maybe if you consolidate some of the words it will have better rhythm to it. Example: Wonder, it's so cool at noon and so hot at midnight. Yes, wonder, the world seems so full of wonder. Or something along that line with your own words. Please keep writing every day, it will start to flow naturally. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn