Wonder Land Comments

Nice elaboration of the apparent absurd happenings. They are so much so that you will find them no where. That's why our love for this place is so deep...... enjoyed

Yes, this is incredible India. Beautiful write Aswath. Loved reading the way you presented it beautifully.

Poems written under a refrain are well-composed pieces mostly, so this one is no exception...the poetic tools and flow helped the muse to pour out the natural and meaningful rhymes!

Yes, this is incredible India, Aswath! Here all are Godmen! Anyone a little unusual gains the status of Gods and Lords! We wait for someone as heroes to be worshipped! Enjoyed the pungent satire!

Aswath, you have begun to realise the pace of this world and as a poet who sees things with a visionary in making you are making leaps as never before. The poem deserves a 10 and I thank you for sharing this great piece here.

hey bro...superb poem..depicting the realities of todays life....liked this para the most This land where you see Ten year olds with I Phone Income burns as home loan Tounges we wished that had bone!